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Post by allstar123 on Nov 7, 2014 20:49:40 GMT -5
hello everyone i'm waffle or allstar and today i will be hosting um... well this show doesn't have a name yet but it will soon anyway i will show 16 conteatens and you get to bet who will win if your bet is right you win A SUPER SECRET PRISE if your wrong you get the wonderful prize of NOTHING also you may PM me your oc the first two to do that gets thier charter in the game but you must fill out this sheet in your pm
oc name-
nickname-
gender-
are they missing any body parts like arms or legs-
personalty-
label-
hero or villion-
oc likes-
oc dislikes-
if you were eliminated first what would you do-
if you were eliminated before the merge what would you do-
if you were eliminated after the merge what would you do-
if you came 2nd what would you do-
if you won what would your oc do- ---------------------------------------------- here are the contestens and their labels also labels
boardgame-girl-the gamer girl
wool cap-boy-the hipster
spotlight-boy-the diva actor
package-boy-the deliveryman
teacup-boy-the fancy guy
portal-girl-the telaporting rebel
cat mask-girl-the shy girl
flag-boy-the almost nomal guy
police tape-boy-the 'don't touch me' guy
drums-boy-the annoying guy
sand castle-girl-the ruler
boat in a bottle-girl-the exploder
wrapping paper-girl-the holiday girl
human-man-the no-object
cube-boy-the 4 person guy
dumpster-girl-the waste of space
radio-girl-the niceish one
ok that's it see you later will start win there are two oc's
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 7, 2014 21:17:59 GMT -5
ok the first oc is from luigi radio 1 spot left
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 8, 2014 14:21:38 GMT -5
ok i'm going to start now since no one has sent there pm to me for another oc so spots are closed
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 8, 2014 19:39:20 GMT -5
waffle-hello all and welcome to..um well this show doesn't have a name yet but it well soon anyway i will be hosting a tv show about 17 objects completing for a secret prize and i'll show them to you right now
(waffle jumps on a canoe just as board game sails in)
waffle-and the first person is board game
board game-hi
(board game is a blue box with her name writing on the forut of her she has no arms)
board game-i love games so thats why i joined this one
waffle-cool go to the front dock
board game-okiey dockie
waffle-ok next is wool cap
wool cap-what's up
(wool cap is a grey cap with a white ball on the top of him he has arms and a phones he typing on)
waffle-not much
*beep bo beep*
wool cap-do you know "objects fighting for dead money"
waffle-no
wool cap-well i just won it
waffle-go to board game then
waffle-also next victem is..
spot light-mmmeeeeeee
(spot light is a black tube with light poping out the top of him)
waffle-well thanks for...um that but in your files it says your a actor
spot light-corrot but is pronouced actorrrrr
waffle-um sure go stand with the others
spot light-yay
waffle-ok um so next please
package-hhhiiiiii
(packet is a sideway brown box with a sticker on his top right)
waffle-oh good the deliver man so were's my package
package-i'm a contestant on your show and it should come betwwen 8am and 6pm
waffle-BUT THATS THE WHOLE DAY ugh whatever go there (points)
waffle-and..
teacup-hello ew why is this place so dirty
(teacups is a white cup with blue and green painting)
waffle-because it was abbodding for 5 year
teacup-gross AWWWW
(teacup jumps and runs away)
waffle-ok so next is-
(portal suddenly aperrs and scares waffle almost off the canoe)
waffle-omg you scared me!
(portal is a blue ovel with a swling line in the middle)
portal-thats what i do
(portal telaports away and cap mask comes up from behind the canoe)
cat mask-is she gone
waffle-yup
cat mask-good she was scary
waffle-you could say your a scardy cat HA
cat mask-um..sure
waffle-whatever BOO
cat mask-AAWWW
(cat mask runs away screaming)
waffle-ha ha that bought me happness
flag-hey
(flag is a flag pole with a red flag on the side with his face on it he is armless)
waffle-hi
(flag walks away to the front of the dock)
waffle-well that was quick anyway next is police tape
(police tape is sideway yellow rectangle with 'POLICE TAPE DO NOT CROSS" on him)
waffle-well hello-
police tape-don't touch me
waffle-um..ok
(police tape walks around him and to the dock)
waffle-so say hello drum
drum- (waves)
(drums is a blue drum set with drum sticks in his hands)
waffle-oh great the no talker-
drum-hey i can talk
waffle-nevermind you know the dirl
sand castle-and i'm next the ruler of-
(sand castle is a yellow tower with 3 spuares on top of her)
waffle-nope not listing (kicks sand castle into the docks)
boat in a bottle-hey i'm boat in a bottle or bb i'm a adveter like i always wonder were this ship went before it was in me and-
(bb is a bottle with a black ship in her)
waffle-whoa to much imformation just stand..somewhere
bb-ok
wrapping paper-hello arn't you exsited
(wrapping paper is a green rectangle with little santa hats on him)
waffle-for what?
wrapping paper-well for no-chrismas
waffle-whats no-chrismas
*song starts*
wrapping-±"well as you know-"
waffle-i don't care
*song ends*
(wrapping paper gets carryed away by the wind)
waffle-ok following her is human-wait human he isn't a obj-
(human apperts)
waffle-oh um hi
(human is a stick finger with black out line)
human-...
waffle-um ok go..um i do it for you (throws human on the dock)
waffle-wow that was creeply
nomal cube-not as creeply was me
punk cube-or me
smart cube-or me
happy cube-or me
(cube has 4 sides with 4 different personalty with different looks punk has scraps,smart has glasses,happy has rosey cheeks and nomal is just a nomal face)
waffle- *whispers* freak
punk cube-what you call me
waffle-nothing just stand over there
punk cube-thats what i though (wall walking away)
waffle-and 2nd to last is dumpster
dumpster-hi
(dumpster is a huge green spuare with a lid)
waffle-bye
dumpster- *sigh*
waffle-and last is are contest winner RADIO
radio-hello it's me radio i like music and..um
waffle-mh that's nice now to bye-bye
(waffle is seen standing on the dock with the cast behind him talking)
waffle-17 rip-offs 1 prize this is ' I DON'T KNOW YET"
to be conited
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 9, 2014 22:40:35 GMT -5
hey guys i put a lot of work in part 1 can you review it please and i'm working on part 2's sceenplay so yay
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Post by DS (Possible Debut) (MetalMan) on Nov 10, 2014 15:46:21 GMT -5
Could you fix the grammar? It's almost unreadable with the lack of effort you actually put in into typing. Sometimes I can't read your challenge entries properly.
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 10, 2014 15:51:15 GMT -5
HEY TYPING AND SPELLING HAS ALWAY BEEN MY LOW POINTS IN LIFE SO DON'T JUNGE ME ON MY GRAMMER JUNGE ME ON MY STORY OK IT'S NOT UNREADABLE AND I PUT A LOT OF WORK INTO THIS I SPENT 2 HOURS OF MY TIME TO DO THIS SO DON'T SAY "YOUR GRAMMER IS TERRIBLE" IT'S TYPING SO I MISSED SPELLED A FEW WORDS IT'S NOT TOALLY BAD
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 10, 2014 15:57:05 GMT -5
OK GIVE ME A BREAK I HAD A HARD DAY I JUST WANTED ONE GOOD REVIEW OK I GAVE UP ANOTHER REALLY GOOD CAM PTO DO THIS
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Post by Bell on Nov 10, 2014 15:58:34 GMT -5
i'll correct the grammar for you
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 10, 2014 15:58:37 GMT -5
IF YOU HAVE NOTHING GOOD TO WRITE WRITE NOTHING AT ALL
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 10, 2014 15:59:18 GMT -5
thank you luigi but you don't have to and sorry i guess to ds
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 18, 2014 17:54:08 GMT -5
sorry part 2 is taking long i had a TON of homework it should be out this week or weekend sorry
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Post by allstar123 on Nov 21, 2014 17:14:32 GMT -5
this object show is moving to DA i put the link in later
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