Post by DS (Possible Debut) (MetalMan) on Aug 14, 2014 6:30:01 GMT -5
Challenge 3 is over!
Whistle and Test Tube have not done the challenge. I sent everyone who had not done it a reminder and you two refrained.
Pencil's Story
So there once was a bird. He wanted to fly all his life, but he couldn't! He tried day and night, but never was able to. All the other animals said to him, "Stop wasting your time, you'll never do it!" He never listened to them, and one day he got so mad that he screamed to the top of his lungs, "I'LL SHOW YOU, I'LL FLY OFF OF MOUNT DEATH!" So he did. But he didn't fly. He fell, to his death. The animals cried. And on his grave said the words, BILLY, THE OSTRICH THAT WANTED TO FLY.
The End
Originality - 7
Quality - 8
Effort - 5
Anything Else - 7
Total - 27/40
Yin-Yang's Story
Battle for Dream Island (Again) meets Inanimate Insanity (II)
OJ was just done fixing his Hotel when suddenly, a portal opened, letting out some sort of leaf, laying down on the ground. OJ notices the leaf and asked her.
"Um, who are you?"
"They call me Leafy." the leaf replied, as she got up.
"So you noticed me, .........." Leafy said, not knowing OJ's name.
"Oh, sorry. I'm Orange Juice, but everyone calls me OJ." OJ replied.
"So you noticed me, OJ, coming out of that portal, leading me from Yoyleland, Goiky." said Leafy. "By the way, where am I?" she asked OJ.
"This is Insanity Island*." OJ replied. "Are their any other people in Goiky, wherever that is?"
"Oh, Goiky is a land where an object show called Battle for Dream Island (Again) (BFDI(A) for short) is ongoing and it's latest episode is 5e of Season 2." replied Test Tube.
"Yes, and I whould have said that if Test Tube haven't interupted me." said Leafy, knowing Test Tube's name.
"I didn't interupt you," said Fan "I'm a fan of yours."
Chessy thought it was a nice pun so he slapped his knee and replied "Ha! Fan! Get it? Pun!"
"Not funny, Chessy." said Knife, not amused of Chessy. "If you do that one more time, I'll grate you with Cheese Grater and put you on the leftovers from Soap's Pizza."
Chessy, who was scared from Knife's sentence after already being grated in Episode 4 of Inanimate Insanity 2, ran away from Knife.
"Well, THAT'S not happening again." Nickel said with starcasum.
"So about my friends at Goiky;" said Leafy, referring back to the first topic. "Some of us are different objects, like Puffball."
"She's right." said Puffball as he come out of the portal with Needle, Golf Ball, Tennis Ball and Gelatin riding her.
"Oh, look. Needy's here." said Leafy, not amused that Needle is riding Puffball."
Needle slaps Leafy and replied "Don't call me Needy!"
"And that's why we don't call Needle 'Needy' in BFDI(A)." said Gelatin.
"I know, I've been on BFDI(A)" said Nickel.
"Should we get back to Goiky, guys?" asked Gelatin.
"Yeah." said Needle, agreeing with Gelatin.
"I agree." said Golf Ball.
"Well, let's get back." said Tennis Ball.
"Bye, guys. Take care." said Puffball.
"You too." said OJ.
The End!
Originality - 2
Quality - 6
Effort - 9
Anything Else - 7 (The cheesy gimmick tho )
Total - 24/40
POINTS -
1st. Pencil - 36
2nd. Pen - 31
3rd. Yin-Yang - 24
DANGER ZONE
4th. Whistle - 8
5th. Test Tube - 5
Whistle and Test Tube are up for elimination. Vote for one to leave this mini-camp. Voting ends tomorrow.
Whistle and Test Tube have not done the challenge. I sent everyone who had not done it a reminder and you two refrained.
Pencil's Story
So there once was a bird. He wanted to fly all his life, but he couldn't! He tried day and night, but never was able to. All the other animals said to him, "Stop wasting your time, you'll never do it!" He never listened to them, and one day he got so mad that he screamed to the top of his lungs, "I'LL SHOW YOU, I'LL FLY OFF OF MOUNT DEATH!" So he did. But he didn't fly. He fell, to his death. The animals cried. And on his grave said the words, BILLY, THE OSTRICH THAT WANTED TO FLY.
The End
Originality - 7
Quality - 8
Effort - 5
Anything Else - 7
Total - 27/40
Yin-Yang's Story
Battle for Dream Island (Again) meets Inanimate Insanity (II)
OJ was just done fixing his Hotel when suddenly, a portal opened, letting out some sort of leaf, laying down on the ground. OJ notices the leaf and asked her.
"Um, who are you?"
"They call me Leafy." the leaf replied, as she got up.
"So you noticed me, .........." Leafy said, not knowing OJ's name.
"Oh, sorry. I'm Orange Juice, but everyone calls me OJ." OJ replied.
"So you noticed me, OJ, coming out of that portal, leading me from Yoyleland, Goiky." said Leafy. "By the way, where am I?" she asked OJ.
"This is Insanity Island*." OJ replied. "Are their any other people in Goiky, wherever that is?"
"Oh, Goiky is a land where an object show called Battle for Dream Island (Again) (BFDI(A) for short) is ongoing and it's latest episode is 5e of Season 2." replied Test Tube.
"Yes, and I whould have said that if Test Tube haven't interupted me." said Leafy, knowing Test Tube's name.
"I didn't interupt you," said Fan "I'm a fan of yours."
Chessy thought it was a nice pun so he slapped his knee and replied "Ha! Fan! Get it? Pun!"
"Not funny, Chessy." said Knife, not amused of Chessy. "If you do that one more time, I'll grate you with Cheese Grater and put you on the leftovers from Soap's Pizza."
Chessy, who was scared from Knife's sentence after already being grated in Episode 4 of Inanimate Insanity 2, ran away from Knife.
"Well, THAT'S not happening again." Nickel said with starcasum.
"So about my friends at Goiky;" said Leafy, referring back to the first topic. "Some of us are different objects, like Puffball."
"She's right." said Puffball as he come out of the portal with Needle, Golf Ball, Tennis Ball and Gelatin riding her.
"Oh, look. Needy's here." said Leafy, not amused that Needle is riding Puffball."
Needle slaps Leafy and replied "Don't call me Needy!"
"And that's why we don't call Needle 'Needy' in BFDI(A)." said Gelatin.
"I know, I've been on BFDI(A)" said Nickel.
"Should we get back to Goiky, guys?" asked Gelatin.
"Yeah." said Needle, agreeing with Gelatin.
"I agree." said Golf Ball.
"Well, let's get back." said Tennis Ball.
"Bye, guys. Take care." said Puffball.
"You too." said OJ.
The End!
Originality - 2
Quality - 6
Effort - 9
Anything Else - 7 (The cheesy gimmick tho )
Total - 24/40
POINTS -
1st. Pencil - 36
2nd. Pen - 31
3rd. Yin-Yang - 24
DANGER ZONE
4th. Whistle - 8
5th. Test Tube - 5
Whistle and Test Tube are up for elimination. Vote for one to leave this mini-camp. Voting ends tomorrow.